I am not so good at this. This is my first trial. Hope readers will enjoy going through this ☺
I heard people saying,
God can’t be everywhere
So he created you….
I kept thinking over that
And then i realised,
Upto a extent they were true….
Like God, u give give and forgive
And we get get and forget
You did a lot for us that
Still, on giving our hundred percent
There remains something due….
You are happy either you are sad.
You don’t let us know, not a single clue….
All your desire is to fullfill our wishes
As we grew….
But when the pain comes to us
Or our situation is worse
When we are losing our trust
Our only hope is you….
You want to live for us.
You want to die for us.
You want to teach us.
You want to reach us to the highest point.
You are the best creation of god.
You are the mother.
Must share your views all of you.
Lovely poem 🙂
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Thanx
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Very touching, quite true and well written!
Keep writing !
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Thank you ☺
Sure i will 😊
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Reblogged this on theutopiauniverse and commented:
To Mothers every where, this is a post by mahimasingh97, that I have reblogged here for all to see, she kindly directed me to this after seeing my post today, A beautiful poem by her
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inspirable
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Thanx ☺
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Basically I don’t read poetry . But your first poem on your Mom impressed me a lot . If you love reading books , do read my Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara available from Notion Press @ Rs 200
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Wow it really means a lot to me that you were impressed by my poetry.
I will must read the book.
Will order soon☺
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Waooo loved it!!!
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☺
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Loved it 🙂
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Thanx ☺
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🙂
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Mother’s love shapes cultures and individuals.
Awsm poem di luv it .
Shivam
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Soooo much loveeee…. Keep writing 😀😊
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Yeah i will…
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lovely poem…… ❤
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Thnx
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Such a lovely, lovely poem and beautiful sentiment…you are a loving and loyal daughter, and your mother must be amazing 🙂
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Yeah…she is amazing
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Thnx a lot
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No doubt she lives for us.. Very well penned
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Thnx
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Your id plz…
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Awesome_rk
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Woe
Poem
Ni6
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Thnx
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I can’t think about much better poem for a mother than this . lovely mahima
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Thnx for appreciation.
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Okay then where can we talk? 😛
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Do you use skype???
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Yes..
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Well…then we can tlk there…
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Okay.. So whats ur id?
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Angelmahi18
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Added 🙂
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☺
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So should we talk now?
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I never take my words back…
We can be paka wala frnds 😝
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Nice poem..
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Thnx
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Welcome.. Btw wat about that. after reading my poetry u wanted to become my pkka frnd? 😀
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Best try……poetessss mahi
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Thnx adi
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Too Good @ Keep it up$All the Best$Thanku!
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Thnx
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nice try…..!!!!
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Thnx…
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